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Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 16, 2001 @ 9:50pm

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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 16, 2001 @ 9:54pm

oh, and 999, some of my articles aren't to good, and I realise that. Some I just had no interest in, others I had no idea about what I was writing so used lots of industry buzz words. But I like my Beetle Buggin' article, atleast from what I remember of it. Vampire: Masquerade was a pretty good review too. And I don't remember Shenmue. Traitor was bland, if I posted the PQ Article up, I barely even started it so it doesn't count, PSO was alright, I think, Earth 2150 was kind of bland. But you'll read them. And you've read my PM so be sure to send back criticism, I want it.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby 999v.2 » Jul 16, 2001 @ 10:13pm

You Stink...<br><br>How's that for critisizm, oh wait, that's a fact~<br><br>
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 1:01am

o ya, remeber how long i spent on that review moose. o ya 30  minutes.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 8:41am

That's not an excuse, Chuck. That's another reason why you're bad at writing reviews.<br><br>Thanks for the backwards compliment 999.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Paul » Jul 17, 2001 @ 8:52am

why are his reviews bad? i havent read 'em but... um... what makes a bad review anyways?
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 9:59am

poor grammer, lack of descriptive words, not many facts about the product, too many opinionated statements, length.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Paul » Jul 17, 2001 @ 10:44am

what too short? i cant believe that
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 2:05pm

And yes, I know I spelled grammar incorrectly, but I was rushing out the door when I was typing that.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 5:30pm

well, umm the only person that critized it alot was you. JJB  went ahead and  helped me. By fixing the grammar problems he saw and sending me a amended copy. And there were enough facts.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby CheezBoy » Jul 17, 2001 @ 9:46pm

I find it hard to criticize writing because everyone writes differently. That is why I find English teachers annoying because they want you to follow their style and not be unique. Writing is like an art and you shouldn’t be chastised for being different.
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 10:08pm

Cheez, that's only true once you reach a certain point. There are, however, grammatical standards that must be upheld. These don't fit into the category of "writing style" so they can be judge, and a person can be chastised for mistakes. Some rules aren't written in stone, though.<br><br>Such as not using an "And", "But", or "Or" at the beginning of a sentence. Some of the best authors in human history have ignored that rule, and for good reason.<br><br>But someone that misplaces commas, uses excessively long sentences, uses its instead of it's when refering to "it is", using "then" when "than" is meant (when items are being compared, not sequential events), replacing "well" with "good", and many other errors is worthy of chastisement. This is identical to when a newbie releases his or her first Counter-Strike map to the public. Most of the time it sucks, and (s)he's ridiculed. But as that person learns techniques and gains knowledge he or she becomes a better mapper. Just as in writing. If you learn from mistakes made you become better. But if you blow of criticism and the people that spout it, you will only end up hating everyone and yourself.<br>This is why I'm so critical. By judging all, I can more quickly make them better people. Though most of the time I get jack slapped by that girl with the long fingure-nails.<br>
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Mike Wagstaff » Jul 17, 2001 @ 10:18pm

"Cheez, that's only true once you reach a certain point."<br><br>- Wrong meaning. Replace "once you reach" with "up to".<br><br>"These don't fit into the category of "writing style" so they can be judge, and a person can be chastised for mistakes."<br><br>- Replace "judge" with "judged". Unclear meaning. Adding a comma after "writing style" would help.<br><br>"Such as not using an "And", "But", or "Or" at the beginning of a sentence."<br><br>- Such as not using "Such as" at the beginning of a sentence?<br><br>"Some of the best authors in human history..."<br><br>- How many authors do you know of outside human history?<br><br>"and for good reason"<br><br>- Article missing.<br><br>"But someone that misplaces commas, uses excessively long sentences, uses its instead of it's when refering to "it is", using "then" when "than" is meant (when items are being compared, not sequential events), replacing "well" with "good", and many other errors is worthy of chastisement. This is identical to when a newbie releases his or her first Counter-Strike map to the public."<br><br>- Excessively long sentence.<br><br>"If you learn from mistakes made you become better."<br><br>- Consider the addition of a comma after "made".<br><br>"But if you blow of criticism..."<br><br>- Replace "of" with "off".<br><br>"I can more quickly make them better people."<br><br>- Replace "more quickly" with "quicker" and position it at the end of the sentence.<br><br>"fingure-nails"<br><br>- Don't exist. Finger-nails do.<br><br>Sorry, couldn't resist! ;)<br><br>My point in all of this argument is simply this: at the end of the day, it's what you say that's important. Not how you say it.<br>
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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby Moose or Chuck » Jul 17, 2001 @ 10:31pm

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Re: Brighthand HACKED!

Postby CheezBoy » Jul 17, 2001 @ 10:33pm

Behold the power of Cheez!!! or Ahh, the power of Cheez!!!
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