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PROPortable Notebook / Pocket PC Ad

PostPosted: May 6, 2004 @ 2:49am
by PROPortable

PostPosted: May 6, 2004 @ 3:05am
by someone somebody

PostPosted: May 6, 2004 @ 4:55am
by sponge
It's hard to read the white outlined text, otherwise it looks good. The white glow seems a bit overdone too, IMO.

PostPosted: May 6, 2004 @ 6:08am
by deciever

PostPosted: May 6, 2004 @ 11:28pm
by Guest

PostPosted: May 6, 2004 @ 11:53pm
by brain1

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 1:36am
by Crypty
I like it overall but have 2 minor problems with it.

1) That pink text does not look too attractive

but more importantly

2) It looks a little washed out. Maybe darken it a tiny bit, make the colors more vivid y'know?

EDIT
Cooked this up as an example. Notice the text color changes and its slightly darker. If you want me to help with anything as far as photoshopping, i'd be happy to.


Image


EDIT: Saturated the LCDs to make them look more vibrant.
Image

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 3:52am
by PROPortable

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 3:54am
by sponge

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 5:12am
by brian1

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 5:43am
by deciever

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 7:11am
by PROPortable

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 7:12am
by PROPortable

PostPosted: May 7, 2004 @ 10:14am
by Guest