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Moose's Poem


Moose's Poem

Postby James S » Jan 25, 2002 @ 2:34am

The rain beat steadily against the roof of the car as the mechanical jerk of the wipers sounded just as frequently. The sun hadn't shown its merciful rays for days.

The driver of the car glanced from side to side as the glare on the windshield flashed from a flourecent red to green. The sound of the rain becaming deafening as the car accelerated away from the intersection. The interior of the car lit momentarily as the man sitting in the rear struck a match. The flame rose to the cigar in his mouth, shortly followed by two voluminous puffs of smoke and a violent shaking of the now tiny light. The car returned to darkness, save one lone speck of light, occasionally brightening enough to make out the man's figure.

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Yet another work in progress by James Sonne, tentatively named "Trepid."
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Postby James S » Jan 25, 2002 @ 2:37am

Let's see... I remember writing that at 9 o'clock at night on a road trip... misspelled words galore, plus it reflects a limited vocabulary. I'll think about rewriting that in the light of day :P
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Postby TechMage » Jan 26, 2002 @ 8:58am

The flame rose to the cigar in his mouth, shortly followed by two voluminous puffs of smoke and a violent shaking of the now tiny light.



:!: Um.. I'm a smoker, and weither smoking cigars or cigarettes, you don't shake the ashes loose after two puffs, there simply is no ashes yet to shake off. :!:
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Postby James S » Jan 26, 2002 @ 3:37pm

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Postby brntcrsp » Jan 26, 2002 @ 8:30pm

Tech - what sort of pansy puffs do you take?!? j/k
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Postby James S » Jan 26, 2002 @ 8:38pm

Chris, why on earth did you move this to it's own thread?
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Postby Paul » Jan 26, 2002 @ 8:40pm

he did? i thought you made this thread...
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Postby Chris Edwards » Jan 26, 2002 @ 10:12pm

I had deleted that jibberish thread, cause it didn't have a purpose anymore... So, I just moved this to anything :)
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Postby James S » Jan 26, 2002 @ 10:35pm

I didn't make this, paul.
So you moved it because ... you liked it so much?
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Postby Chris Edwards » Jan 26, 2002 @ 11:05pm

Sure :).
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Postby NYIllustrator » Jan 27, 2002 @ 9:55pm

Well I am a cigar smoker, and I can tell you it'll be a good fifteen minutes before you even ash a cigar for the first time.
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Postby brntcrsp » Jan 28, 2002 @ 5:16am

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Postby James S » Jan 28, 2002 @ 2:31pm

Thanks Davinci, that's nice to know. Moving on...
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Postby Dr. Phat » Feb 14, 2002 @ 10:28pm

Yeah, heres a Phat Poem by me...
I like my dog
its name is Bender
I futurama
which fox is trying to hinder!
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Postby Village_Ideot » Feb 15, 2002 @ 12:15am

chemosaow?
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